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Post by Soghog on Apr 24, 2012 19:39:11 GMT -5
I made a separate thread specifically for scripts. We will continue to use the other thread for plot ideas, but we will discuss the script itself here.
I ask that you upload the script as a docx or txt file so that it doesn't take up too much room and is easy to modify. Also, please name it as "ScriptDraft1" and so on.
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Post by ironicsalmon on Apr 24, 2012 21:24:49 GMT -5
docx? never heard of it. txt I can do. Where do you want me to put it?
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Post by Soghog on Apr 24, 2012 21:29:54 GMT -5
Simply attach it to your post. You'll find a toolbar that allows attachments if you click "reply".
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Post by ironicsalmon on Apr 24, 2012 21:38:35 GMT -5
Done! srry for the wait! Attachments:
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Post by ironicsalmon on Apr 24, 2012 21:43:44 GMT -5
alternate Attachments:
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Post by janja50 on Apr 25, 2012 13:26:24 GMT -5
im gonne put this stuff in we can always change/edit afterwards
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Post by janja50 on Apr 25, 2012 13:30:54 GMT -5
the beginning makes it to obvious im gonne cut a little bit in it
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Post by Soghog on Apr 25, 2012 13:50:27 GMT -5
It's somewhat already obvious who the killer is, but I think we should obscure the motive a little more in the beginning.
Also, I can come up with a few law-related jokes that we may want to work in later into the trial.
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Post by ironicsalmon on Apr 25, 2012 13:55:43 GMT -5
Wait, but isnt the killer usually revealed in the first case? Also, how can we make the motive even more obscure?
Also Jan i'll put it in when i have some time if you want me to simply because there are certain effects i want to apply in certain places, and text speeds and what not
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Post by janja50 on Apr 25, 2012 13:58:06 GMT -5
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Post by ironicsalmon on Apr 25, 2012 13:58:28 GMT -5
Wait, I think the .txt file is the newest version. the .doc is the one i forgot to save srry
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Post by ironicsalmon on Apr 25, 2012 14:05:08 GMT -5
Hey Jan, are you in the trial editor right now? Also, we should probably take his father off of the profiles list.
Oh and I now see what you mean Sog (about the motive)
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Post by janja50 on Apr 25, 2012 14:06:02 GMT -5
look at my edit and tell me what you think
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Post by ironicsalmon on Apr 25, 2012 14:10:54 GMT -5
Well I was going to ask if i could use the editor (Because of what you said earlier about 2 people saving over each other).
I dont really have any problems with the edit except that he should be somewhat excited to see peter (At least a little bit, because of who he really is). Also the "Im proud" part gives it away a bit.
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Post by Soghog on Apr 25, 2012 14:19:18 GMT -5
Here's some excerpts I wrote up, see what you guys think about whether we can work them in. Attachments:
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