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Post by janja50 on May 20, 2012 18:10:00 GMT -5
because its ben it should be a very badly drawn map
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Post by Soghog on May 20, 2012 23:42:43 GMT -5
Wait this is taking place at a park now?
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Post by ironicsalmon on May 21, 2012 11:26:35 GMT -5
it always was, wasn't it? Besides, some of the stuff wouldn't make sense if it was just an overpass. Also, im surprised that your surprised thats how i wrote it the first time. didnt you read the script?
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Post by Soghog on May 21, 2012 13:53:44 GMT -5
It's been a while since I read your earlier draft, and I wasn't able to read any of your later drafts because of the format.
Here's why the whole park thing surprised me; when I was writing the whole overpass bit (this was back for the synopisis), this was how I envisioned it; You have an overpass above and perpendicular to another road. Becky is walking underneath this lower road, while the crime scene is taking place directly above her. Because she is underneath the crime scene, she can hear the commotion and get blood on her, but can't see who did it. When she climbs some stairs up to the overpass to investigate, this is when Kyle is coming along and sees her. Not once did I mention a park anywhere in the synopsis.
If this isn't how you envisioned it, well, then I don't see any point in even including an overpass if it's all taking place somewhere else.
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Post by ironicsalmon on May 21, 2012 22:51:31 GMT -5
Oh. Well i wouldn't see why Becky was under an overpass, but the general idea is kind of the same. I thought that Kyle was on a road leading into town that is parallel to the bridge enough so that he couldn't see Becky under the bridge (who is perpendicular to the bridge), and still see the figure of the 2 men on the bridge. basically though, the rest of it is the same. And Kyle come off of the road and parks, walks up and sees becky on the bridge.
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Post by ironicsalmon on May 21, 2012 22:56:11 GMT -5
in case you didn't get it before. Also, it may get confusing because im implmenting your part (Sog's part) in my script. you take .txt, right Sog? Attachments:
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Post by Soghog on May 22, 2012 13:04:11 GMT -5
I can take txt or doc. It looks like your txt files keep getting corrupted, though. Some kind of glitch maybe? I suggested txt since it seemed to be the one format practically every application can use, but if you're having trouble with it I have no problems with doc.
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Post by janja50 on May 22, 2012 13:26:37 GMT -5
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Post by theweirdomaxim on May 22, 2012 13:57:38 GMT -5
yes...its pretty cool huh!
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Post by ironicsalmon on May 22, 2012 21:57:50 GMT -5
Im fine with .txt but are they getting messed up every time? and the .docs?
Also I think i posted a .doc version of the script on the "Turnabout Awesome" section.
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Post by ironicsalmon on Jun 28, 2012 11:37:24 GMT -5
The latest version of the Case 1 Script. Gavin still needs to be fleshed out into Apollo Justice Gavin, but besides that I have been able to make significant progress. So I would also like what you have for the script so far because I know you have been writing as well.
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Post by ironicsalmon on Jun 28, 2012 11:37:44 GMT -5
And Another thing. EVERYONE should be reading the attachments for the script whether it's mine or other writers scripts on the team. Right now there are barely any stage directions, but when the script is done it will have certain emotions, backgrounds, etc. that will be shown on screen and the spriters/artists will especially need to be notified by the script if we need anything special that isn't on the characters original sprite sheet. So EVERYONE please read this latest draft! Thank you.
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Post by ironicsalmon on Jun 28, 2012 11:38:35 GMT -5
script Attachments:
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Post by ironicsalmon on Jul 23, 2012 20:10:49 GMT -5
ALMOST DONE!! Listen, I'm sorry it took so long. I just really needed to make sure that this was as good as I could make it. I will revise it before I post it in its final stage but I just wanted to inform everyone that I am close to finishing the Case 1 script and that EVERYONE especially the writers for Case 2 NEED to read it when I am finally done. Also thanks for not losing hope If you did well, idk but yeah. WOOOOP!
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Post by ironicsalmon on Jul 25, 2012 15:38:05 GMT -5
Here it is in txt. form [Unfinished; Not revised] Attachments:
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