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Post by Soghog on Apr 13, 2012 17:55:17 GMT -5
I like what I'm seeing so far, but whoever wrote it, you may want to put the rest of your script here in case we need to review it or whatnot.
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Post by ironicsalmon on Apr 13, 2012 18:10:36 GMT -5
I have been writing a few things, but I really need to talk to whoever added the most recent content. We need to discuss whats going on a reach a level playing field. We need to get the story straight. Also, it is said in the case that the blunderbuss was taken by the criminal, so it shouldn't be in the evidence spot at all.
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Post by Soghog on Apr 13, 2012 18:15:26 GMT -5
Well I didn't add any content, but I did do some spellchecking and added Deacon's profile. So I don't know who the last person to add anything was. I had assumed you guys already had a script since it was already half-written.
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Post by ironicsalmon on Apr 13, 2012 18:19:15 GMT -5
Hehe. Actually I came up with my stuff off of the top of my head lol. But I couldn't get many people who were working on this to approve my ideas except for lidien (couldn't get in contact). So I added stuff in and apparently somebody make new stuff today or yesterday like the Gun evidence, and the Kyle testimony. They did really leave a name either.
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Post by Soghog on Apr 13, 2012 18:24:35 GMT -5
Well, any ideas where you're going with this?
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Post by ironicsalmon on Apr 13, 2012 18:31:07 GMT -5
Well, the idea I had (Evidenced by the intro) was the Fraser, Ben, Deacon, and Kyle have to save Becky from being sent to jail. They pose as a Detective (Ben), A witness(I guess Kyle), and a prosecutor (Deacon thinks he's helping). Phoenix Wright trains Fraser to be a defense attorney, as well, because he started tutoring Becky before the murder and wants to help prove her innocence. I was even thinking of a section where you build the judge's trust by presenting evidence and answering questions to "prove" that you are a lawyer while your "health bar" slowly decreases. An intense timed section, if you will.
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Post by ironicsalmon on Apr 13, 2012 18:33:08 GMT -5
Piano tutor for Becky because he plays piano in AJ:AA, and Beck has shown at least a slight interest in piano on the show. She has enough time between shows to learn it.
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Post by janja50 on Apr 13, 2012 18:36:22 GMT -5
I already have this one finished guys : Mr.Death and Detective Taylor have a history together. So the met in the park and Death tried to kill Ben with the gun but ben shot him in self defence then he shot a second bullet to draw attention of kyle and becky becky went to check on the noise and thats when kyle saw her with the body. Beckys prints where never on the gun since ben never let any fingerprint tests be ran Ben didnt get arrested because it was self defence.
The real murdrer was Death from the start (you can think about that in 2 ways and both are correct)
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Post by Soghog on Apr 13, 2012 18:40:45 GMT -5
That's pretty confusing. Why was Becky arrested? Why didn't Ben as the detective admit he was the one who shot Mr. Death, and in self defense? Why is Mr. Death the "real Murderer" if he's the one who's dead? Why did Death try to kill Ben? Where does the piano lessons fit in?
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Post by ironicsalmon on Apr 13, 2012 18:43:50 GMT -5
Wait, did Kyle seen Ben at all? And did Becky see Ben and will she be testifying at all? Also does that mean that what I wrote is null and void? Im just a bit confused. Can you elaborate just a bit, please?
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Post by janja50 on Apr 13, 2012 18:44:53 GMT -5
I already made up to the second testimony you can play trough and i think you will understand it better
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Post by ironicsalmon on Apr 13, 2012 18:45:17 GMT -5
One more thing, why would Phoenix help Fraser anyway?
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Post by janja50 on Apr 13, 2012 18:48:05 GMT -5
Cause phoenix fights for juctice (and he has a crush on becky)
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Post by ironicsalmon on Apr 13, 2012 18:49:42 GMT -5
But that's so random.....How did he even meet Becky?
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Post by Soghog on Apr 13, 2012 18:52:36 GMT -5
Also who are the people talking in the beginning? Is that supposed to be the chatroom?
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